• ace_garp@lemmy.world
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    6 months ago

    Story A: He was made a Sierra employee, and then later they found out he was disgraced and forced to quit as police chief.

    Nope, the reverse of that… :|

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      6 months ago

      English is weird but this is right. It might read better if it was “and then later they found out he had been disgraced and forced to quit as police chief.”